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Some believe that charitable organisations should help people no matter where they live. Others argue thar charities should only help those living in the country where the charity is based. discuss both the views and give your opinion

It is often considered that of late some people think that charitable organisation help the people all over the world whereas other think these charity help those who living in the country where the charity is found. It has been prevaling concern in the significant part of the world. A sea change has been witnessed in the past few years, the following paragraph would elucidate both the views. Firstly, these organisations have massive contribution in the society. It has always included teaching to next generation how to be a good member of society. I think charitable organisation helps the people no matter where they live for instance NHO organisation which would help the blind people NHO company make their organisation attrative and affordable to the society. Secondly, this focous is wide ranging and inspring for the society on the other hand some people think charity help those who live in their own country where charity was established, each method is unique with its own way of life and own perspetive for example poor people reap the benefits of these organisation because it cheap and affordable for the customers. To sum up, charitable organisation is must for the society, which would develop deeper understanding and strengthen their ability all charity all charity are contributing factor for the society.
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IELTS essay Some believe that charitable organisations should help people no matter where they live. Others argue thar charities should only help those living in the country where the charity is based. discuss both the views and give your opinion

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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