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The reason that i want to pursue a degree in Politics and Governance is because of it's impact on people's lives.

The reason that i want to pursue a degree in Politics and Governance is because of it's impact on people's lives. Experiencing two different wars in my life showed me that by the acts of the politicians our fate is decided and i prefer studying Politics because of my willingness to diligently serve people, make the unheard voices heard, also building and shaping our next generations lives with morally acceptable rules by eliminating the deformities in our current corrupt system which affects on our life. Because of it's good reputation and advanced educating system, intrigued me to study at AUA. It's accredited degree and it's cooperation with international universities and organizations excites me even more to pursue a degree and discover it more. I am sure that AUA will leave a great impact on my academical life, it would be an honor to be one of the first students of this newly launched major. Acquiring politics major in a recognized university from the greatest professors who are highly skilled and developed in their fields will be an opportunity for me in building my future. One of the qualities that AUA has is its teaching method with experience, by studying politics i cannot wait to join the conferences done by AUA. In my future goals, i would like to serve my people in international organizations to represent and help my country to shape and rebuild for the better and also creating a good team to help world's most vulnerable.
The reason that i want to pursue a degree in
Politics
and Governance is
because
of it's impact on
people
's
lives
.

Experiencing two
different
wars in my life
showed
me that by the acts of the politicians our fate
is decided
and i prefer studying
Politics
because
of my willingness to
diligently
serve
people
,
make
the unheard voices heard,
also
building and shaping our
next
generations
lives
with
morally
acceptable
rules
by eliminating the deformities in our
current
corrupt system which affects on our life.

Because
of it's
good
reputation and advanced educating system, intrigued me to study at AUA.

It's accredited degree and it's cooperation with international universities and organizations excites me even more to pursue a degree and discover it more.

I am sure that AUA will
leave
a great impact on my academical life, it would be an honor to be one of the
first
students of this
newly
launched major.

Acquiring
politics
major in a recognized university from the greatest professors who are
highly
skilled and developed in their fields will be an opportunity for me in building my future.

One of the qualities that AUA has is its teaching method with experience, by studying
politics
i cannot wait to
join
the conferences done by AUA.

In my future goals, i would like to serve my
people
in international organizations to represent and
help
my country to shape and rebuild for the better and
also
creating a
good
team to
help
world's most vulnerable.
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IELTS essay The reason that i want to pursue a degree in Politics and Governance is because of it's impact on people's lives.

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