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Academic teaching is important for passing the exam, and other skills such as cooking or dressing should be not taught. To what extend you agree or disagree

Academic teaching is important for passing the exam, and other skills such as cooking or dressing should be not taught. To what extend you agree or disagree 0Al1n
Overall development of a child is one of the key aspects that contribute to success. Acquiring academic knowledge is important, but it is not enough to survive the ups and downs of life. Therefore, I disagree with the idea, to limit teaching to academic for the sake of passing exams. In this essay, I will discuss the importance of other skills along with academics. To commence with my disagreement, it should be noted that education is a medium of developing logic in a child's brain, to face a situation. In other words, academic help us to earn a living, but to be in society, one needs to learn about how one has to present himself in society. For instance, if a great mathematician is invited to honour his achievement and he did not wear the appropriate clothing, he might not receive the respect he deserves. Therefore, a child must be taught about how to dress up in the society in which we live. There are certain moral skills and duties that every person expects from others in society. For example, providing first aid to an ailing patient is necessary for its survival, and a person nearby can assist in providing it. This is possible only if he has some basic knowledge or skills to do so. However, it is not an obligation as part of academic teaching of helping a person in need, but one must do it on humanitarian grounds. To summarise the essay, it is absolutely necessary to teach social skills and moral values to students receiving academic qualification. This will support in maintaining work-life balance in our lives, without which, it would be a quite messy
Overall
development of a child is one of the key aspects that contribute to success. Acquiring
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academic
knowledge is
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important
,
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but
it is not
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enough
to survive the ups and downs of life.
Therefore
, I disagree with the
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idea
, to limit teaching to
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academic
for the sake of passing exams. In this essay, I will discuss the importance of other
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skills
along with academics.

To commence with my disagreement, it should
be noted
that education is a medium of developing logic in a child's brain, to face a situation.
In other words
,
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academic
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help
us to earn a living,
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but
to be in
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society
, one needs to learn about how one
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has to
present himself in
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society
.
For instance
, if a great mathematician
is invited
to
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honour
his
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achievement and
he did not wear the appropriate clothing, he might not receive the respect he deserves.
Therefore
, a child
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must
be taught
about how to dress up in the
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society
in which we
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live
.

There are certain moral
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skills
and duties that every person
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expects
from others in
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society
.
For example
, providing
first
aid to an ailing patient is necessary for its survival, and a person nearby can assist in providing it. This is possible
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only
if he has
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some
basic knowledge or
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skills
to do
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so
.
However
, it is not an obligation as part of
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academic
teaching of helping a person in need,
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but
one
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must
do it on humanitarian grounds.

To
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summarise
the essay, it is
absolutely
necessary to teach social
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skills
and moral values to students receiving
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
academic
qualification. This will support in maintaining work-life balance in our
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lives
, without which, it would be a quite
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messy
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IELTS essay Academic teaching is important for passing the exam, and other skills such as cooking or dressing should be not taught. To what extend you agree or disagree

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
278 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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