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About your profile, likes and dislikes BLyRd
My profile Just an ordinary gal who love drinking alcohol and always thinking about something. How boring is that? Just joking! I am introverted all the time, jobless, close to my family, and have a little friend. I would love to eat hot and spicy food when I was drunk, and Burmese food by mom cooking only. And then I love to watch movies the whole night and read books especially based on true romance stories, but It has been a long time ago I didn’t read the novel. I love to write script and film analysis. I prefer to stay at home in holiday. I don’t like to adventure trip except beach. Although I am not a good photographer, but I would like to capture my daily routine or random snap.
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drinking alcohol and always thinking about something. How boring is that?
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all the time, jobless, close to my family, and have a
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to eat hot and spicy food when I
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movies the whole night and read books
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based on true romance stories,
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to write script and film analysis. I prefer to stay at home in holiday.
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IELTS essay About your profile, likes and dislikes

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
132 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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