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A World without communication

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Is it possible to imagine a future without communication? Communication is something essential for our society to live with which binds them together in order to live, work, share ideas together or create something that is unique and valuable. Today modern life style is totally impossible to live without communication as we are following the steps of highly advanced technology in the society. We are tending to make communication a sort of natural communicating and more efficient on using it. We are living in a world full of differences and we must discover a formula on how to lower the communication barrier that’s being display. Communicating means everything for everyone which is to understand not only communication but also languages being used. Society will collapse as communication were eliminated from the world and leading to life extinction to all the species on earth. In the event that this text isn’t rendered in its current frame, the piece of data that is being conveyed ceases to be a bit of data, avoiding the collector to create an understanding and the sender to exteriorize their understanding. Moreover, in case communication isn’t accessible within the world, each person will stay in their private social and incapable to not as it were started and create a social life but to perform fundamental capacities that are essential for life. As for another example; humans eats, drink, rest and discharge essentially for survival. When we consider the whole species, generation to gets to be an fundamental work. In case, if human cannot communicate there would be no other way they can tell the producer of the nourishment that an edible item is required within the time of starvation. In this case that is cannot be passed on, the maker would not know the request and that they will stay no motivation to create. As for consequencely, nourishment would not be created advanced social orders will not be conceptualized. On the off chance that communication is killed from the world that we exist within, the current worldwide of society would collapse which can in the long run lead to the termination of life.
Is it possible to imagine a future without
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is something essential for our society to
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live
with which binds them together in order to
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live
, work, share
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ideas
together or
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create
something
that is
unique and valuable.
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Today
modern
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life
style is
totally
impossible to
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live
without
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communication
as we are following the steps of
highly
advanced technology in the society. We are tending to
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make
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communication
a sort of natural communicating and more efficient on using it. We are living in a
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world
full of
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differences and
we
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must
discover a formula on how to lower the
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communication
barrier that’s being display. Communicating means everything
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for
everyone which is to understand not
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only
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communication
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but
also
languages being
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used
.

Society will collapse as
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communication
were eliminated
from the
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world
and leading to
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life
extinction to all the species on earth. In the
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event
that this text isn’t rendered in its
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current
frame, the piece of data
that is
being conveyed
ceases to be a bit of data, avoiding the collector to
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create
an understanding and the sender to
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exteriorize
their understanding.
Moreover
, in case
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communication
isn’t accessible within the
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world
, each person will stay in their private social and incapable to not as it were
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started
and
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create
a social
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life
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but
to perform fundamental capacities that are essential for
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life
. As for another example; humans eats, drink, rest and discharge
essentially
for survival. When we consider the whole species, generation to
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gets
to be
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an
fundamental work. In case, if human cannot communicate there would be no other way they can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
the producer of the nourishment that an edible item
is required
within the time of starvation.
In this case
that is
cannot
be passed
on, the maker would not know the request and that they will stay no motivation to
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create
. As for
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consequencely
, nourishment would not
be created
advanced social orders will not
be conceptualized
.

On the off chance that
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communication
is killed
from the
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world
that we exist within, the
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current
worldwide of society would collapse which can in the long run lead to the termination of
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life
.
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IELTS essay A World without communication

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
356 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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