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A TERRIBLE STORY in my life

A TERRIBLE STORY in my life G9Mpj
Yesterday, my aunt ask me why I didn't ask a permitting when I attend a scientific research project. I didn't know I should say anything at all! Then, she made me attend a Speaking English and she said: " You have to see English benefits. When my friend studied doctorate, thanks to English, she didn't have to attend compulsory English class. Also thanks to English, she can apply for a scholarship to study Ph. D. Do you think it's great? ? ? " Perhaps, she make me follow all her desire and all things involved my career need to be under her influence. All her words remind me of another aunt. The one thing they both have in common is that they are conservative. I will not be negative anything because conservatives are never receptive to other people's opinions. Sadly, I am one of them. Thanks to all of the above, I ensure that my decision is exactly
Yesterday, my aunt ask me why I didn't ask a permitting when I attend a scientific research project. I didn't know I should say anything at all!

Then, she made me attend a Speaking
English and
she said:
"
You
have to
see
English benefits. When my friend studied doctorate, thanks to English, she didn't
have to
attend compulsory English
class
.
Also
thanks to English, she can apply for a scholarship to study
Ph. D.
Do you
think
it's great? ? ?
"


Perhaps, she
make
me follow all her desire and all things involved my career need to be under her influence. All her words remind me of another aunt. The one thing they both have in common is that they are conservative. I will not be
negative
anything
because
conservatives are never receptive to other
people
's opinions.
Sadly
, I am one of them.

Thanks to
all of the
above, I ensure that my decision is exactly
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IELTS essay A TERRIBLE STORY in my life

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
157 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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