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a strange memory in holiday

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I can remember the lateast holiday where I went to. It was the journey of Isfahan before spreading Covid-19 and restrictions. My husband and I arranged a plan before anything then we packed our suitcases and moved on. On the way, something strange happend. I can remember the lateast holiday where I went to. It was the journey of Isfahan before spreading Covid-19 and restrictions. My husband and I arranged a plan before anything then we packed our suitcases and moved on. On the way, something strange happend.
I can remember the
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lateast
holiday where I went to. It was the journey of Isfahan
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before
spreading Covid-19 and restrictions. My husband and I arranged a plan
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before
anything then we packed our suitcases and
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moved
on. On the way, something strange
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. I can remember the
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lateast
holiday where I went to. It was the journey of Isfahan
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
before
spreading Covid-19 and restrictions.

My husband and I arranged a plan
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
before
anything then we packed our suitcases and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
moved
on.

On the way, something strange
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happend
.
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IELTS essay a strange memory in holiday

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
88 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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