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A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. with this opinion? e6eK

People's worth nowadays seems to be judged on how they look and wore on social media. The values of honor, kindness and trust seem to vanished. I strongly agree with this matter. The paragraph below shows why I agree on this problem. First of all, Society has become increasingly materialistic because most of the people believe that the more they put jewelries and expensive dress the more they received respect from society. for example, Buying gadgets while wearing t-shirts and shorts and another customer came in wearing expensive bag. The saleslady assist directly to that person wearing fancy bag. We live in an age where equality is no longer important where governments can receive money from convectors to decreased their sentence, and the most important issue is racism. skin color and face discrimination are the huge problem all over the world. In conclusion, If this trend would continue individuals will forget the word honor, kindness and respect.

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People
's worth nowadays seems to be judged
 on how they look and wore on social media. The values of honor, kindness and trust seem to vanished. I strongly
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agree
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shows
 why I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 on this problem.

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because
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people
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 example, Buying gadgets while wearing t-shirts and shorts and another customer came in wearing expensive bag. The saleslady assist directly
 to that person wearing fancy bag.

We This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in an age where equality is no longer This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
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governments
 can receive money from convectors to decreased their sentence, and the most This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 issue is racism. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSkin
skin
 color and face discrimination are the huge problem all over the world.

In conclusion
, If this trend would continue individuals will forget the word honor, kindness and respect. 