Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. with this opinion? LroN6
As it is mentioned that a person is valued based on his possessions what he owned currently or respect he earned from the society. In the modern world people are not going to value a person interms of his honour, kindness and trust not like the previous old-fashioned world. I do not completed agree with this statement. While considering the judgement on people, it differs person to person. Firstly, why am I not completely agree with this? Because, we can not assure that status has been identified only through wealth rather than the person's family heritage or actions. Consider a family or a person is being kind to the whole region, making and suggesting appropriate solutions to the problem not through his wealth but, interms of his intellectual ability. As he knows that he will not gain anything directly, but it will save the life. For instance, the Former Cheif Minister of Tamil Nadu spare his entire life to serve the people and let them have an improved society without any poverty. Eventhough he is not from a wealthy family, due to the actions he taken to improve the region was just remarkable. Everyone in the state admired this fact and accepted him as a true legend. So, we can not completed agree with the statement which tells us person's worth only judged via their social status. On the contrary, some people values other's worth according to the possessions they have. If some one having more money in the entire world considered as a powerful man. People believe they worth for the respect without knowing the hardwork done to attain this enormous amount of money whether it is done by his parents or other people. For example, some of the top billioners around the world are rich by birth. People should be value them based on the actions done by the rich people irrespective of their wealth. However, in this current world people admire them without even knowing how much these people help the society to improve. They want to gain something from them so they does not care about anything else. Not everyone, but certain amount of people still juding others based on their status. In short, we can not deny all of them showing respect only through person's characteristics like honour, kindness towards them. But, a know amout of people judging others inorder to seeking help in the future.
As it
is mentioned
that a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
person
is valued
based on his possessions what he
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
owned
currently
or respect he earned from the society. In the modern
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
world
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
are not going to value a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
person
Possible spelling mistake found.
interms
of his
Possible spelling mistake. 'honour' is British English.
honour
, kindness and trust not like the previous
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
-fashioned
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
world
. I do not
After the auxiliary verb 'do', use the base form of a verb. Did you mean "complete"?
completed
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
with this statement. While considering the judgement on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
, it differs
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
person
to person.

Firstly
, why am I not completely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
with this?
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Because
, we can not assure that status has
been identified
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
through wealth
rather
than the person's family heritage or actions. Consider a family or a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
person
is being kind to the whole region, making and suggesting appropriate solutions to the problem not through his wealth
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
,
Possible spelling mistake found.
interms
of his intellectual ability. As he knows that he will not gain anything
directly
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it will save the life.
For instance
, the Former
Possible spelling mistake found.
Cheif
Minister of Tamil Nadu spare his entire life to serve the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
them have an
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improved
society without any poverty.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Eventhough
he is not from a wealthy family, due to the actions he taken to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
the region was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
remarkable. Everyone in the state admired this fact and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
accepted
him as a true legend.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, we can not
The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: "complete"
completed
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
with the statement which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tells
us person's worth
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
judged via their social status.

On the contrary
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
If 'people' is plural here, don't use the third-person singular verb.
values
other's worth according to the possessions they have.
“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
Did you mean "someone"?
some one
having more money in the entire
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
world
considered as a powerful
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
man
.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
People
believe they worth for the respect without knowing the
Possible spelling mistake found.
hardwork
done to attain this enormous amount of money whether it
is done
by his parents or other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
.
For example
,
If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?
some of the
top
Possible spelling mistake found.
billioners
around the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
world
are rich by birth.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
People
should be
Did you mean "valued"?
value
them based on the actions done by the rich
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
irrespective of their wealth.
However
, in this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
world
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
admire them without even knowing how much these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
the society to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
. They want to gain something from them
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
they
The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: "do"
does
not care about anything else. Not everyone,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
certain amount of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
still
Possible spelling mistake found.
juding
others based on their status.

In short, we can not deny all of them showing respect
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
through person's characteristics like
Possible spelling mistake. 'honour' is British English.
honour
, kindness towards them.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
, a know
Possible spelling mistake found.
amout
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
judging others
Possible spelling mistake found.
inorder
to seeking
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
in the future.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. with this opinion?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
401 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.