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Write about the following topic: A number of tertiary courses require students to undertake a period of unpaid work at art institution or organisation as part of their programme. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this type of course requirement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words

Life is filled with experiences and knowledge. Tertiary courses that require students to take part in unpaid works has both advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion, this type of courses have their own pros and cons to offer. This type of course requirement provides work experience to students. Working and studying at the same time adds up to our knowledge. It makes us ready to face the outer world. Students gain confidence in themselves before they actually start working after completion of their studies. Building connections and personal relations before starting work after graduation can make the journey much easier. However, it has its disadvantages too. Working while studying can get tiring for the students. Balancing work and studies can be a little troublesome. Also giving all our hard work to the job can distract us from our studies. These types of course requirements might be stressful as well as discouraging for students having trouble in school works. Requiring students to take part in unpaid works has its advantages and disadvantages. Thus, it has to be balanced out considering the efforts of the students that has to be divided in studies and work.
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is filled
with experiences and knowledge. Tertiary
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courses
that require
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students
to
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take part
in unpaid works has both advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion, this type of
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courses
have their
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own
pros and cons to offer.

This type of
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course
requirement provides
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work
experience to
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students
. Working and studying at the same time
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adds
up to our knowledge. It
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makes
us ready to face the outer world.
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Students
gain confidence in themselves
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before
they actually
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start
working after completion of their
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studies
. Building connections and personal relations
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before
starting
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work
after graduation can
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make
the journey much easier.

However
, it has its disadvantages too. Working while studying can
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get
tiring for the
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students
. Balancing
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work
and
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studies
can be a
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little
troublesome.
Also
giving all our
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hard
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work
to the job can distract us from our
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studies
. These types of
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course
requirements might be stressful
as well
as discouraging for
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students
having trouble in school works.

Requiring
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students
to
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take part
in unpaid works has its advantages and disadvantages.
Thus
, it
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has to
be balanced
out considering the efforts of the
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students
that
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has to
be divided
in
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studies
and
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work
.
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IELTS essay : A number of tertiary courses require students to undertake a period of unpaid work at art institution or organisation as part of their programme. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this type of course requirement?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
193 words
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