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A lot of people think that the things you learn outside school are much more useful than anything you learn in school. Others believe that school teaches you most of the essential skills which will be useful later in life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A lot of people think that the things you learn outside school are much more useful than anything you learn in school. Others believe that school teaches you most of the essential skills which will be useful later in life. EWeR
From lots of Czech traditions, I choose the tradition called Masopust, because now is its period and I planned to participate in it for the first time this year, but it was canceled because of coronavirus. It is a three- days holiday before 40 days of carnival ( from the Italian word carne levare – goodbye meet). It has celebrated meat and spring. It has been celebrated for over 800 years. Also, this tradition is written on the UNESCO list. It is interesting is that this holiday was not disrupted by Communism. The cCarnivals traditions is known worldwide known. The most famous is fore example in Venice or Rio de Janeiro, but the Czech one is very different. Masopust is more folk, personal and fairy-tale. Participants of Masopust should dance, sing, eat, drink and wish everything the best at a every house in a village. Traditionally most men are wearing masks like a symbol of fertility. Every colourful costume has a role to play and nice features. The exception is a horse, it representspretends sins. The hHorse is ´´killed´´ aton the end of the procession, but it is resurrected again like a symbol of spring beginning. The most popular are masks of bears, horses, skeletons, chimney sweepers, straw men and red men. This occasion starts in villages houses, then there is a parade through the city, followeds by the coronation of the queen of Masopust and also there is a theater play of students. Last but not least, there is a parade of costumes on the main square, meeting on the top with the next village and it ends by celebrations in a big tent full of food, drinks, music, dancing and performances of acrobats. I am interested inby this holiday, because it is about folks creativity – people have meetings before it and make masks together and I think it is good for relationships in a village. They do slaughterhouse, they have mountains of food for example Czech donuts and this will pleasantly shorten the long winter waiting for spring.
From lots of Czech
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,
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first
time this year,
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but
it
was canceled
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because
of coronavirus.

It is a three- days holiday
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before
40 days of carnival
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(
from the Italian word
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carne
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levare
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–
goodbye
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meet
). It has celebrated meat and spring.
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It
has
been celebrated
for over 800 years.
Also
, this
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tradition
is written
on the UNESCO list. It is interesting is that this holiday was not disrupted by Communism.

The
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cCarnivals
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traditions
is known
worldwide known. The most
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famous
is fore example in Venice or Rio de Janeiro,
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but
the Czech one is
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very
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different
.
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Masopust
is more folk, personal and fairy-tale. Participants of
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Masopust
should dance, sing, eat, drink and wish everything the best at
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a
every
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house
in a
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village
.
Traditionally
most
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men
are wearing masks like a symbol of fertility. Every
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colourful
costume has a role to play and nice features. The exception is a horse, it
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representspretends
sins. The
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hHorse
is ´´killed´´
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aton
the
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end
of the procession,
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but
it
is resurrected
again like a symbol of spring beginning.
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The
most popular are masks of bears, horses, skeletons, chimney sweepers, straw
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men
and red
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men
.

This occasion
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starts
in
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villages
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houses
, then there is a parade through the city,
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followeds
by the coronation of the queen of
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Masopust
and
also
there is a theater play of students. Last
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but
not least, there is a parade of costumes on the main square, meeting on the top with the
next
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village
and it ends by celebrations in a
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big
tent full of food, drinks, music, dancing and performances of acrobats.

I
am interested
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inby
this holiday,
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because
it is about folks creativity
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–
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people
have meetings
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before
it and
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make
masks together and I
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think
it is
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good
for relationships in a
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village
. They do slaughterhouse, they have mountains of food
for example
Czech donuts and this will
pleasantly
shorten the long winter waiting for spring.
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IELTS essay A lot of people think that the things you learn outside school are much more useful than anything you learn in school. Others believe that school teaches you most of the essential skills which will be useful later in life.

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341 words
5.5
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