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A group of individuals thinks there should be free health care for all citizens, but others disagrees. do you agree or disagree ?

A group of individuals thinks there should be free health care for all citizens, but others disagrees. PL9aK
In this sophisticated world, health care related topics have become heated debates across the globe. A group of individuals thinks there should be free health care for all citizens, but others disagrees. This essay agrees with the given statement, and will be discussed in detail about importance of free health care in further paragraphs before a conlusion. To begin with, health care departments play vital roles in socities. As it is a fundamental necessity for human's lives, it should be available for all people regardless of rich or poor. Furthermore, If it is easily available for everyone, it will save few people's lives at right time. For instance, In many countries, inorder to save their people's lives, they offer free medical services to their country people. Thus, health care facilities should be provided freely. To continue with, when the government collects huge amount of taxes from people, they should be responsible to provide free medical amenities to their country's people. Moreover, the government should utilize tax money effectively to offer free medical facilities. For instance, most of the countries spending people's tax money on medical services to provide free treatments. In contrast, some people think that treatments should not be offered freely. Nonetheless, some treatments may need advanced medical equipments, due to the fact that all medical treatments will not be offered freely. Though government will not be able to afford all the medical expenses, its advantages outweighs its demerits. After analysing various aspects of the topics, it can be concluded that governments should provide free medical services. even though there are some disadvantages in it, its merits outweigh the disadvantages.
In this sophisticated world,
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related topics have become heated debates across the globe.

A group of individuals
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thinks
there should be
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free
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health
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care
for all citizens,
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but
others disagrees.

This essay
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agrees
with the
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given
statement, and will
be discussed
in detail about

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importance
of
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free
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health
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care
in
further
paragraphs
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before
a
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conlusion
.

To
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begin
with,
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health
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departments play vital roles in
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socities
.

As it is a fundamental necessity for human's
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lives
, it should be available for all
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people
regardless of rich or poor.

Furthermore
, If it is
easily
available for everyone, it will save few
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people
's
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lives
at right time.

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, In
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many
countries,
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inorder
to save their
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people
's
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lives
, they offer
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free
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medical
services to their country
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people
.

Thus
,
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health
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care
facilities should
be provided
freely
.

To continue with, when the
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government
collects huge amount of taxes from
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people
,

they should be responsible to provide
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free
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medical
amenities to their country's
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people
.

Moreover
, the
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government
should utilize tax money
effectively
to offer
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free
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medical
facilities.

For instance
, most of the countries spending
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people
's tax money on
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medical
services to provide
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free
treatments.

In contrast
,
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some
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people
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think
that treatments should not
be offered
freely
.

Nonetheless,
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some
treatments may need advanced
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medical
equipments, due to the fact that all
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medical
treatments will not
be offered
freely
.

Though
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government
will not be able to afford all the
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medical
expenses, its advantages outweighs its demerits.

After
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analysing
various aspects of the topics, it can
be concluded
that
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governments
should provide
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free
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medical
services.

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even
though there are
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some
disadvantages in it, its merits outweigh the disadvantages.
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IELTS essay A group of individuals thinks there should be free health care for all citizens, but others disagrees.

Essay
  American English
18 paragraphs
271 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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