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A D The rules that societies expect young to follow and obey are too strict

A D The rules that societies expect young to follow and obey are too strict KwYd1
Every child must have been taught to behave themselves thousands of times during their childhood. As children grow up, they are also told what should and should not do, how to act, how to communicate with others. The society has expected youngsters to become the figure in its own perspective. Sometimes the rules are easily accepted and understood, while in other moments the rules are just too hard to follow and obey. Common values stand inside people’s heart. It’s well accepted and easy for young generation to agree with politeness, respects as well as honesty. For example, everybody a. . .
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what should and should not do, how to act, how to communicate with others. The society has
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expected
youngsters to become the figure in its
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accepted
and understood, while in other moments the
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too
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hard
to follow and obey.

Common values stand inside
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people
’s heart. It’s well
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accepted
and easy for young generation to
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agree
with politeness, respects
as well
as honesty.
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IELTS essay A D The rules that societies expect young to follow and obey are too strict

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
101 words
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