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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to achieve happiness yourself is to make others happy.

The best way to achieve happiness yourself is to make others happy. m1501

Great men or women often states that they are mentally fulfilled by helping other people and making the world become better. Nevertheless, in my personal view, the way ordinary people achieve their own happiness is not essentially connected to making others happy but to make them comfortable of themselves. I would like to address several reasons to substantiate my point of view. People have preferences. According to various social, educational and environmental backgrounds, different individuals would not always judge or consider the same thing in the exact same way. They don’t share simi. . .

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