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The reading passage explains three possible theories about the author of Voynich manuscript.

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The reading passage explains three possible theories about the author of Voynich manuscript. However, in the lecture the professor respectively contradicts all the assertions by using three specific points as supports. At first, the idea of Anatony Ascham was the author of this mysterious manuscript due to the analogues between scientific information of Voynich with those in Ascham's medicine book. While the lecturer points out the fact that people on the era of Anthony was too illiterate to understand the content of his book. So, he had no need to encode his book and he is highly unlikely to be the writer of the Voynich. Secondly, the reading mentiones that Edward Kelley who pretend to have magic power for deceiving people made a fake book to get money from them. On the other hand, the professor repudiates this idea by saying that people on that time are too simple to need so much effort for cheating them. Finally, although the reading passage claims that Wlfrid as a big dealer of antique material might created the fake manuscript to attract the attention of people who hd passion into ancient things, But the professor states that the survey on the age og ink of manuscript shows that he lived many years after the creation of this book and the ink is older than his time
The reading passage
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explains
three possible theories about the author of
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Voynich
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manuscript
.
However
, in the lecture the professor
respectively
contradicts all the assertions by using three specific points as supports.

At
first
, the
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idea
of
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Anatony
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Ascham
was the author of this mysterious
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manuscript
due to the analogues between scientific information of
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Voynich
with those in
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Ascham
's medicine
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book
.
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While
the lecturer points out the fact that
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people
on the era of Anthony was too illiterate to understand the content of his
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book
.
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So
, he had no need to encode his
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book and
he is
highly
unlikely to be the writer of the
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Voynich
.

Secondly
, the reading
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mentiones
that Edward Kelley who pretend to have magic power for deceiving
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people
made a fake
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book
to
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get
money from them.
On the other hand
, the professor repudiates this
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idea
by saying that
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people
on that time are too simple to need
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so
much effort for cheating them.

Finally
, although the reading passage claims that
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Wlfrid
as a
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big
dealer of antique material might created the fake
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manuscript
to attract the attention of
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people
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who hd
passion into ancient things,
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But
the professor states that the survey on the age
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og
ink of
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manuscript
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shows
that he
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lived
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many
years after the creation of this
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book
and the ink is older than his time

IELTS essay The reading passage explains three possible theories about the author of Voynich manuscript.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
222 words
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