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4. Do you prefer to take handwritten notes during a lecture or to type your notesdirectly into a laptop computer? Why? v.1

4. Do you prefer to take handwritten notes during a lecture or to type your notesdirectly into a laptop computer? Why? v. 1
Fees are higher education is expensive and not affordable for everyone so, according to some, university should be free for all people regardless of their background. In my opinion, I agree that campus education ought to be free as it will greatly benefit both individual and community. A good reason to abolish university fees that it allows people, whether they are rich or poor equal rights, in addition, student from poor backgrounds are prevented from entering the campus, because they are unable to pay the fees. This excludes a large proportion of society and is discriminating which can be avoided by getting rid of tuition fees. Another point to consider is that having no fees at institute means that students will no longer have to work at the same time to cover their costs. For example, around three quarters of all student in the UK have to work either full time or part time while studying to pay their fees. Free higher education should, therefore, produce better results as students will be able to afford to apply themselves to the study exclusively. Finally, free institute education will benefit society in the long run, for the simple reason that it will open up for higher education to a wider section of the population. This will result in progressively increasing the number of educated people. In other words, having a greater resource of skill and knowledgeable professional will bring considerate amount of reward to the society as well. Moreover, it can generate more economics advantage to a country that shows itself to be prosperous and leading in various fields. In conclusion, free university education is a must for any country that values equal right and one that wished to advance. The cost of free education will be recouped many times over by the benefits it brings.
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Fees
are higher
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education
is expensive and not affordable for everyone
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so
, according to
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some
, university should be
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free
for all
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people
regardless of their background. In my opinion, I
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agree
that campus
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education
ought to be
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free
as it will
greatly
benefit both individual and community.

A
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
reason to abolish university
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fees
that it
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allows
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people
, whether they are rich or poor equal rights,
in addition
,
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student
from poor backgrounds are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
prevented
from entering the campus,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they are unable to pay the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fees
. This excludes a large proportion of society and is discriminating which can
be avoided
by getting rid of tuition fees.

Another point to consider is that having no
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fees
at institute means that
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students
will no longer
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
work at the same
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time
to cover their costs.
For example
, around three quarters of all
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student
in the UK
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
work either full
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time
or part
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time
while studying to pay their
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fees
.
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Free
higher
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education
should,
therefore
, produce better results as
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students
will be able to afford to apply themselves to the study exclusively.

Finally
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
free
institute
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
will benefit society in the long run, for the simple reason that it will open up for higher
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
to a wider section of the population. This will result in
progressively
increasing the number of educated
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
.
In other words
, having a greater resource of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
and knowledgeable professional will bring considerate amount of reward to the society
as well
.
Moreover
, it can generate more economics advantage to a country that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
shows
itself to be prosperous and leading in various fields.

In conclusion
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
free
university
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
is a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
for any country that values equal right and one that wished to advance. The cost of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
free
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
will
be recouped
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
times
over by the benefits it brings.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay 4. Do you prefer to take handwritten notes during a lecture or to type your notesdirectly into a laptop computer? Why? v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
304 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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