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131. What is the best strategy for solving a difficult problem? Use examples and reasons in your explanation. v.1

131. What is the best strategy for solving a difficult problem? Use examples and reasons in your explanation. v. 1
These days, sports are more taking apart around the peoples so, there are more benefits for health to improve the immune system. Some members like to play with or without teams depending upon the attitude. But what is the most effective method for dealing with it beneficial to take part in the teams? In this essay, I will support my opinion with examples. Firstly of all, there are getting more confident while peoples are playing with teams. Later, they have motivated and developed their skills in the game of the negative impression got a group member to scold of the coach. For example, football is more attractive in my country around playing the highest persons available. M. S Dhoni is the perfect player in the teams also to get change thinking of mindset. He was getting more achievement a great reward of the prime minister of India. Secondly, some of them need to play single without others like swimming, tennis, etc. They are increasing of own profile building itself that has a great revolution. Nobody, to give any ideas or tricks to play a win in the game player that of learning to see others like a different situation among the players. For instance, P. V. Sindhu one of the best tennis court players around the world, so she got gold awards. In conclusion, although it is a common belief that thinking about the attitudes of playing with or without teams. I believe that the confidence and motivation of the persons come from groups than individual sports are coming to profile building.
These days, sports are more taking apart around the peoples
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so
, there are more benefits for health to
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improve
the immune system.
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Some
members like to play with or without
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teams
depending upon the attitude.
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But
what is the most effective method for dealing with it beneficial to
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take part
in the
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teams
? In this essay, I will support my opinion with examples.

Firstly
of all, there are getting more confident while peoples are playing with
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teams
. Later, they have motivated and developed their
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skills
in the game of the
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negative
impression
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got
a group member to scold of the coach.
For example
, football is more attractive in my country around playing the highest persons available. M. S
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Dhoni
is the perfect
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player
in the
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teams
also
to
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get
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change
thinking of mindset. He was getting more achievement a great reward of the prime minister of India.

Secondly
,
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some
of them need to play single without others like swimming, tennis, etc. They are increasing of
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own
profile building itself that has a great revolution. Nobody, to give any
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ideas
or tricks to play a win in the game
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player
that of learning to
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see
others like a
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different
situation among the
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players
.
For instance
, P. V.
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Sindhu
one of the best tennis court
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players
around the world,
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so
she
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got
gold awards.

In conclusion
, although it is a common belief that thinking about the attitudes of playing with or without
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teams
. I believe that the confidence and motivation of the persons
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
from groups than individual sports are coming to profile building.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay 131. What is the best strategy for solving a difficult problem? Use examples and reasons in your explanation. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
262 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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