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10. Talk about a job that helps making the work better place: What the job is? How you learn about it ? Why do you think it helps so much? And explain why do you think it make the world better place.

10. Talk about a job that helps making the work better place: What the job is? How you learn about it? Why do you think it helps so much? And explain why do you think it make the world better place. AjwKN
There are  thousands of occupations in the world.   Some need professional training, such as nurses, teachers, lawyers;   and other might only need hand-on training. One job I want to talk about right now is waste collector, also known as refuse collector. In Edmonton, they drive a garbage truck on the street around the city to pick up garbages and then deliver them to Edmonton garbage management centre. I started to pay an attention to this job when I saw them collecting wastes and dump them to the truck from my back yard at the moment when I moved into my current place about five years ago. Although this job dose not need  professional training,  waste collectors are super important to maintain a clean living environment and reduce pollution to our habitant.   Because, as I said above, they pick up non-recyclable waste materials from homes, apartment buildings, and businesses and transport them to the garbage management centre for landfilling. Every day, there are tons of non-recycling wastes produced by local habitants. Properly dumping them to a garbage processing centres are crucial to keep living environment clean and prevent mice or cockroaches overly growing. All these creatures will transmit contagious diseases, which will place citizens' health into risks. About 3 years ago, in Edmonton, refuse collectors went on a strike. It took the city government about 1 months to reach the new contract with them. During that periods, all garbages were accumulated in every where all around the city. Along with bad smelling from the garbage bags, all the wastes turned Edmonton into a large garbage centre. Therefore, the job of refuse collectors is super important to the human societies.
There are
  
thousands of occupations in the world.
  
Some
need professional training, such as nurses, teachers, lawyers;
 
and other might
only
need hand-on training.

One
job
I want to talk about right
now
is
waste
collector,
also
known as refuse collector. In Edmonton, they drive a garbage truck on the street around the city to pick up
garbages
and then deliver them to Edmonton garbage management
centre
.

I
started
to pay an attention to this
job
when I
saw
them collecting
wastes
and dump them to the truck from my back yard at the moment when I
moved
into my
current
place about five years ago.

Although this
job
dose not need
 
professional training,
 waste
collectors are super
important
to maintain a clean living environment and
reduce
pollution to our habitant.
 
Because
, as I said above, they pick up non-recyclable
waste
materials from homes, apartment buildings, and businesses and transport them to the garbage management
centre
for
landfilling
.

Every day, there are tons of non-recycling
wastes
produced by local habitants.
Properly
dumping them to a garbage processing
centres
are crucial to
keep
living environment clean and
prevent
mice or cockroaches
overly
growing. All these creatures will transmit contagious diseases, which will place citizens' health into
risks
.

About 3 years ago, in Edmonton, refuse collectors went on a strike. It took the city
government
about 1 months to reach the new contract with them. During that periods, all
garbages
were accumulated
in
every where
all around the city. Along with 
bad
smelling from the garbage bags, all the
wastes
turned Edmonton into a large garbage
centre
.
Therefore
, the
job
of refuse collectors is super
important
to the human societies.
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IELTS essay 10. Talk about a job that helps making the work better place: What the job is? How you learn about it? Why do you think it helps so much? And explain why do you think it make the world better place.

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