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1. Some say that todays life is better than it will be in the future; others disagree and say that in the future life will be better than now. Discuss, and include your own opinion

1. Some say that todays life is better than it will be in the future; others disagree and say that in the future life will be better than now. Discuss, and include your own opinion g5AVd
Life is divided into many phases such as infancy, teenage, adulthood and old age. It is said by some individuals that these days life is much better as compared to upcoming years, while others believe that in forthcoming life will be more secured and happy than the present era. In my perspective, it is impossible to predict that life would be better or worse in future, but it is possibility that there could be more facilities as compared to the modern era. To begin with, It is seen in modern societies that people are enjoying more facilities because of transportation and technological development as compared to past because these days due to the availability of mobiles phones and laptops have completely transformed the lifestyle of people. They can communicate in different ways with each other, whereas during the past there were fewer sources of communication. For instance, a survey was conducted by Karl Mark in 2018 and reviews of people were collected, and it had concluded that some people told that life is happy these days, but others think that life was better in ancient time. On the other hand, some people opine that people would be more contented and satisfied in future because of the more facilities in life because in upcoming years there could be a possibility that robot can make the tasks of people easy and quick and computers would be more advanced and there could be more advanced machines which could make all the household chores easy. To recapitulate, I would like to write that it's really hard to make a prediction that future would be better. People should focus on their present life and they should make efforts to improve their future.
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as compared to upcoming years, while others believe that in forthcoming
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life
will be more secured and happy than the present era. In my perspective, it is impossible to predict that
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life
would be
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or worse in
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,
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it is possibility that there could be more facilities as compared to the modern era.

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with, It is
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are enjoying more facilities
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of transportation and technological development as compared to past
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these days due to the availability of mobiles phones and laptops have completely transformed the lifestyle of
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people
. They can communicate in
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different
ways with each
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, whereas during the past there were fewer sources of communication.
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, a survey
was conducted
by Karl Mark in 2018 and reviews of
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people
were collected
, and it had concluded that
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in ancient time.

On the
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opine that
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would be more contented and satisfied in
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because
of the more facilities in
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life
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in upcoming years there could be a possibility that robot can
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the tasks of
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people
easy and quick and computers would be more advanced and there could be more advanced machines which could
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all the household chores easy.

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really
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to
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a prediction that
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.
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should focus on their present
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IELTS essay 1. Some say that todays life is better than it will be in the future; others disagree and say that in the future life will be better than now. Discuss, and include your own opinion

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