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Rain is our best friend. Do you agree or disagree?

Rain is our best friend. Do you agree or disagree? n6xYl
beside sunny day, rainy also bring many advantage ( except we get wet). Rainy keep calm the mood after working day we get exhausted and stress. It has been famous theme in song and artist. Maybe some day you at home and hear the sound of rain you'll cry, but you know what. Rain can be the closest friend listen the things you won't talk. Just listen you side by side you more an hour.
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advantage
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wet). Rainy
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calm the mood after working day we
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theme in song and artist. Maybe
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day you at home and hear the sound of rain you'll cry,
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IELTS essay Rain is our best friend. Do you agree or disagree?

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  American English
1 paragraphs
75 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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