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your favourite furniture in your home?

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There is many furniture in my home, but if I have to talk about my favorite one, I will say that it is my computer desk. Basically, I love my desk because I spend a lot of time there every day for my work or study purpose. After getting a good score in my SSC examination, my father bought me a computer as a reward. However, there was not enough space in my previous table to fit a computer on that, and that's why I need to buy a new one. Therefore, my father and I went to a local furniture shop in order to buy a new table. My father chose that table because the table's design was attractive, and I also agreed. The reason is, the table has some other facilities like in the bottom there are some drawers where I can keep my essential accessories, and on the top, there is a shelf where I put my books and other assignment papers. There is a small problem. The table is so big that it doesn't fit in my room if that was in my room, I was fell happier and enjoyed watching movies or drama on laying on my bed.

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many furniture
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buy
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buy
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. My father chose that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcounterbuffetbenchstanddeskbar
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because
 the table's design was attractive, and I also
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agreed
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table
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some
 other facilities like in the bottom there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
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keep
 my essential accessories, and on the top, there is a shelf where I put my books and other assignment papers.

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small
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table
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so
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 that it doesn't fit in my room if that was in my room, I was fell happier and enjoyed watching movies or drama on laying on my bed. 