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The given chart depicts the Britain, amoung the four European countries listed has spent most heavily on the range of consumer goods included. In even case, British spending is considerably higher than that of other countries: only in the case of tennis racquet does another country, Italy, come close .

The given chart depicts the Britain, amoung the four European countries listed has spent most heavily on the range of consumer goods included. In even case, British spending is considerably higher than that of other countries: only in the case of tennis racquet does another country, Italy, come close. kLoMR
The given chart depicts the Britain, amoung the four European countries listed has spent most heavily on the range of consumer goods included. In even case, British spending is considerably higher than that of other countries: only in the case of tennis racquet does another country, Italy, come close. In contrast, Germany in generally the lower spender. This is most evident in photography film, where Germany spend much less than Britain. Germany only spends more than another country, France, in two casses: tennis racquet and perfumes. Meanwhile, France and Italy generally maintain middle position, averaging approximately similar spending overall. Specifically, France spends more on CDs and photographic film but less on tennis racquet than Italy does. Italy's spending on person stereo is only marginally greater than that of France, while spending on toys is equal between the two. Overall, it is clear from the data given that there are some significant differences in spending habits within Europe
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IELTS academic The given chart depicts the Britain, amoung the four European countries listed has spent most heavily on the range of consumer goods included. In even case, British spending is considerably higher than that of other countries: only in the case of tennis racquet does another country, Italy, come close.

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