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The diagram below shows about the making of ceramic pots. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

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The diagram depicts the information about the manufacturing of ceramic pots. After analyzing, it can be seen clearly that in the first stride, raw materials are dug out from the ground by a machine, in the second stomp, materials are transported by truck to the factory, in the third stage in factory, materials are pressed into the crushing machine. After that, water is mixed into crushed materials where it is also molded properly. The diagram further collates that in the next traipse, this molded mixture is dried for 4 to 6 hours, afterward the mixture is changed into clay pots. Subsequently, pots are put in the oven and heated at the temperature of 1000 degrees celsius. Nextly, color is applied to each pot, last but not least step colored pots are kept in a machine for color firing. Finally, all pots are manufactured. Overall, all steps are interlinked with each other, if any step would be missed then manufacturing of ceramic pots can halt.
The diagram depicts the information about the manufacturing of ceramic pots.

After analyzing, it can be
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seen
clearly
that in the
first
stride, raw
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materials
are dug
out from the ground by a machine, in the second stomp,
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materials
are transported
by truck to the factory, in the third stage in factory,
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materials
are pressed
into the crushing machine. After that, water
is mixed
into crushed
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materials
where it is
also
molded
properly
.

The diagram
further
collates that in the
next
traipse, this molded mixture
is dried
for 4 to 6 hours, afterward the mixture is
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changed
into clay
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pots
.
Subsequently
,
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pots
are put
in the oven and heated at the temperature of 1000 degrees
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celsius
.
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Nextly
, color
is applied
to each
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pot
, last
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but
not
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least
step colored
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pots
are
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kept
in a machine for color firing.
Finally
, all
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pots
are manufactured
.

Overall
, all steps
are interlinked
with each other, if any step would
be missed
then manufacturing of ceramic
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pots
can halt.
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