Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

younis yassin going to scoohl everyday

younis yassin going to scoohl everyday r1qo2
The maps illustrate the changes that have occurred on an island due the building of facilities for tourists. There are obvious changes happened for island, which let anyone get surprise. Firstly, many accommodations added now. Therefore, encourage people to visit island to spend enjoyable time as well as make their mode in relaxation. As a result, this earn a huge income to the island and economy of country will increased definitely. Secondly, swimming area, one of the attractive thing, much people looking for swimming in priority when they decided to choose where they should go. Hence, it is considerable change. Beside, a big restaurant no one can ignore the importance of it. Some tourists prefer to walk inside the island rather then used car, so to add footpath gave the island full beautiful view.
The maps illustrate the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
that have occurred on an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
island
due the building of facilities for tourists.

There are obvious
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
happened for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
island
, which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
anyone
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
surprise.
Firstly
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
accommodations
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
added
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
.
Therefore
, encourage
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
to visit
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
island
to spend enjoyable time
as well
as
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
their mode in relaxation.
As a result
,
The verb 'earn' is plural. Did you mean: "this earns"? Did you use a verb instead of a noun?
this earn
a huge income to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
island
and economy of country will
The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "increase"
increased
definitely.
Secondly
, swimming area, one of the attractive thing, much
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
looking for swimming in priority when they decided to choose where they should go.
Hence
, it is considerable
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
. Beside, a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
restaurant no one can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ignore
the importance of it.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
tourists prefer to walk inside the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
island
rather
Did you mean "than"? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
then
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
car,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
add
footpath gave the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
island
full
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
view.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic younis yassin going to scoohl everyday

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
134 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • younis yassin going to scoohl everyday