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The charts below show the results of a survey on happiness ratings for married and unmarried people in the US, and the effect of children on the overall ratings of married couples.

The charts below show the results of a survey on happiness ratings for married and unmarried people in the US, and the effect of children on the overall ratings of married couples. KWRKM
It can be seen that there are two charts about how happy people are when they are married and single as well as the happiness ratings of the children of people who are married in the USA. The graph compares the levels of happiness of people at different ages. According to the graph married are happier than unmarried people. It can be observed in the category married the group happiest are between ages of 18 and 29 with 45 percent while the 55 to 64 age group represents the unhappiest category. In contrast, the largest group of the happiest singles are over the age of 65 represented by 34 percent, subsequently, people between the ages of 30 and 49 make up the second happiest group by 22 percent. The second chart demonstrates an interesting rating the children´s couple have similar amounts of happiness. The happiest children are represented in the group under 18-year-old with 44 percent and other groups with a similar percentage, adults with 43 percent and children to 18 years old 41 percent. Overall is clear that married people are happier arriving almost double of percentage compare with singles as a consequence their children are happy as well with the similar rate.
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in the USA. The graph compares the levels of happiness of
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According to the graph married are happier than unmarried
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while the 55 to 64
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represents the unhappiest category.

In contrast
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singles are over the
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by 22 percent.

The second chart demonstrates an interesting rating the
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couple have similar amounts of happiness. The
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with 44
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41 percent.

Overall
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are happier arriving almost double of percentage compare with singles as a consequence their
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are happy
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with the similar rate.

IELTS academic The charts below show the results of a survey on happiness ratings for married and unmarried people in the US, and the effect of children on the overall ratings of married couples.

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