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wrote a pahargrapg about by summarize by taking and repoering exam

wrote a pahargrapg about by summarize by taking and repoering exam Y2L6d
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IELTS academic wrote a pahargrapg about by summarize by taking and repoering exam

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
84 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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