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Task - I You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The following diagram shows a cross-section of a camera and its parts. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram illustrates, the various parts that are present in a camera. It has a total of seven parts. The camera is divided into two section's the front and the back, majority of the components are placed at the back. To begin with, a path of light is made to fall of the lens of the camera. The lens are placed in a cylindrical shaped object which is the front part of the camera. Moreover, the photographer must look at the desired object through the eyepiece. Next, the focusing screen and pentaprism are placed right infront of the eyepiece, to focus the object. Futher, a rotating mirror is attached below the focusing screen and the pentaprism, as the name suggest's the mirror acts like a door. The sixth important component is the digital sensor. Finally, a shutter is placed behind the digital sensor. In conclusion, all these components play a major role. and it is important to follow the aforementioned steps to achieve the desired results.
The diagram illustrates, the various parts that are present in a
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camera
. It has a total of seven parts. The
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camera
is divided
into two
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section's
the front and the back, majority of the components are
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placed
at the back.

To
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begin
with, a path of light
is made
to fall of the lens of the
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camera
. The lens
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are
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placed
in a cylindrical shaped object which is the front part of the
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camera
.
Moreover
, the photographer
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must
look at the desired object through the eyepiece.
Next
, the focusing screen and
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pentaprism
are
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placed
right
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infront
of the eyepiece, to focus the object.
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Futher
, a rotating mirror
is attached
below the focusing screen and the
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pentaprism
, as the name
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suggest's
the mirror acts like a door. The sixth
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important
component is the digital sensor.
Finally
, a shutter is
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placed
behind the digital sensor.

In conclusion
, all these components play a major role.
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and
it is
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important
to follow the aforementioned steps to achieve the desired results.
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IELTS academic Task - I The following diagram shows a cross-section of a camera and its parts.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
166 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Task - I You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The following diagram shows a cross-section of a camera and its parts. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.