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writting task 1 pie chart about water consumption

writting task 1 pie chart about water consumption KWMe0

The pie chart place the water consumption for three main purposes in six different places in the world. It is apparent from those charts that Europe and North America expend the largest proportion of water for industrial use, which takes up 48% and 53% respectively. Whereas, the remained areas utilize water to cater agriculture most and industry accounts for the minimum rate of all categories. Regarding Africa and Central Asia, the rock-bottom are the industrial part which captures 7% and 5% sequentially out of three main purposes, with the higher figure for domestic use, at 7% and 9% approximately. However, there is a unique pattern that South America spend 19% amount of water to supply for domestic, more than twofold of Africa while Central Asia and South East Asia remained at a identical rate: 7%. Except Europe and North America, where industry accounts for more than a half. Four areas left have the highest figure for Agriculture utilizing: almost more than 80 percent of overall. Moreover, the higher figure between irrigation and domestic belongs to the latter. Nevertheless, South East Asia, illustrates the opposing pattern, at 12% for industrial use and 12% for agriculture use approximately.

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