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The pie charts illustrate the statistical information regarding various reasons why people in Japan prefer to walk in comparison to those preferring to travel by car. Overall, it is noticeable that different concerns are reported by the two groups of people. While the majority of those preferring to walk do so for health-related aspects, the highest number of those driving to work point out that this transportation choice is more convenient. Focusing on those choosing to walk, 50% of the respondents perceive that doing so is healthy for themselves. Besides, the numbers of those believing that this is more environmentally friendly and less time consuming are 30% and 18%, respectively. Interestingly, only 2% highlight the importance of the cost of travelling. Turning to those driving to work, convenience is chosen by 40% which is two times greater than the number of those emphasising on the practicality of a long distance travel. In addition, almost one fourth do so for the advantage on speed. Finally, the remaining number of 16% convey that it is safer to travel by car.

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