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The bar graph shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

The bar graph shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. 7Np2
The given bar graph represents the proportion commodities in owner's house and of person who gave rent for residents in England and Wales in the period of 1918 to 2011. All the necessary information and relevant compressions are made in ensuing paragraphs. Overall, it can be observed that in the beginning of period lowest amount of products are owner's home, while highest percentage of households are their in rented home. However, to go to the ending years this was different and opposite of past. In the 1918, household in their house are very lowest, which is only above 20%, and near to 80% of having in rented accommodation. As years passed this ratio goes downwards and increment in persuite own things at home through the 1961. It was same in 1971 both the category has equal percentage, which was 50%. Moreover, after that proportion of items in rented houses are goes down in the period of 1981 to 2001 and sightly increased near to 40% in 2011. On the other hand percentage of commodities in own house steadily inclined nearly to 70% in 2001 and suddenly dropped above 60% in 2011.
The
given
bar graph represents the proportion commodities in owner's
house
and of person who gave rent for residents in England and Wales in the period of 1918 to 2011. All the necessary information and relevant compressions
are made
in ensuing paragraphs.

Overall
, it can
be observed
that in the beginning of period lowest amount of products
are
owner's home, while highest percentage of households are their in rented home.
However
, to go to the ending years this was
different
and opposite of past.

In the 1918, household in their
house
are
very
lowest, which is
only
above 20%, and near to 80% of having in rented accommodation. As years passed this ratio goes downwards and increment in
persuite
own
things at home through the 1961. It was same in 1971 both the category has equal percentage, which was 50%.

Moreover
, after that proportion of items in rented
houses
are goes down in the period of 1981 to 2001 and
sightly
increased near to 40% in 2011.
On the other hand
percentage of commodities in
own
house
steadily
inclined
nearly
to 70% in 2001 and
suddenly
dropped above 60% in 2011.
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IELTS academic The bar graph shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

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4 paragraphs
191 words
6.5
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