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The bar chart below shows information about the global sale of hybrid vehicels in US, Japan and some other countries between 2006 and 2009. In general, the growth of vehicle sales has been low for years in Japan but in 2009 the rates of sale increased highly that even passed the US amount of sales. As it can be seen, the number of sales has been stable for countries like US and Japan in comparison to other countries. Other countries chart changes during this period, followed the high trend and increased slowly from 50000 sales to almost 110000 sales between 2006 and 2009 but as it's clear US number of sales switched and the amount of sales in this country reduced about 70000 but Japan sales rate went on a rise more than 200000 sales in just less than a year. Overall, what extracts from the bar chart revealed that Japan had considerable upward trend in vehicles sales and overtook the US place in 2009.
The bar chart below
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information about the global
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sale
of hybrid
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vehicels
in US,
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Japan
and
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some
other
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countries
between 2006 and 2009.

In general
, the growth of vehicle
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sales
has been low for years in
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Japan
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but
in 2009 the rates of
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sale
increased
highly
that even passed the US amount of sales.

As it can be
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seen
, the number of
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sales
has been stable for
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countries
like US and
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Japan
in comparison
to other countries.

Other
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countries
chart
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changes
during this period, followed the high trend and increased
slowly
from 50000
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sales
to almost 110000
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sales
between 2006 and 2009
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but
as it's
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clear
US number of
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sales
switched and the amount of
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sales
in this
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country
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reduced
about 70000
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but
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Japan
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sales
rate went on a rise more than 200000
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sales
in
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just
less than a year.

Overall
, what extracts from the bar chart revealed that
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Japan
had considerable upward trend in vehicles
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sales
and overtook the US place in 2009.
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