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writing task 1: life cycle of honey bee

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The picture depicts phases of a honey bee’s life cycle. Overall, the process consists of five fundamental stages commencing with eggs and ultimately with adult bees. Plus, the life cycle prolongs from roughly 34 to 36 days. Initially, honey bees experience metamorphosis development during their life cycle. The female honey bees lay 1 to 2 eggs every three days. Afterward, these eggs hatch in 9 to 10 days and as a result small insects called nymphs come out five days later. After first and second stages, the nymph endures moulthing process. To be more specific, nymphs begin to grow triple in their sizes in the first 5 days, next 7 days and lastly 9 days. After 31 days, nymphs develop into young adult emerges and they have several stripes on their bodies. Subsequently, these bees continually increase in their size then after 4 days it turns into mature honey bees. Then mature female bees lay eggs again and finally the cycle of their life repeats.
The picture depicts phases of a honey bee’s
life
cycle
.
Overall
, the process consists of five fundamental stages commencing with eggs and
ultimately
with adult bees. Plus, the
life
cycle
prolongs from roughly 34 to 36 days.

Initially
, honey bees experience metamorphosis development during their
life
cycle
. The female honey bees lay 1 to 2 eggs every three days. Afterward, these eggs hatch in 9 to 10 days and
as a result
small
insects called nymphs
come
out five days later. After
first
and second stages, the nymph endures
moulthing
process. To be more specific, nymphs
begin
to grow triple in their sizes in the
first
5 days,
next
7 days and
lastly
9 days.

After 31 days, nymphs develop into young adult
emerges and
they have several stripes on their bodies.
Subsequently
, these bees
continually
increase in their size then after 4 days it turns into mature honey bees. Then mature female bees lay eggs again and
finally
the
cycle
of their
life
repeats.
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IELTS academic writing task 1: life cycle of honey bee

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
165 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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