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The set of bar charts illustrate the percentage of two genders in employment in three countries in the years 2005 and 2015. At a fleeting glance, in 2005, Sweden men employment accounted for nearly 80%; whereas, women percentage shown exactly half of them. South Korea had the highest rate of male employment approximately 75% in 2005. For the same country, female proportion of working constituted to 30%. Out of other two countries, lowest percentage of male and female employment noticed which was around 60% for male, 38% for female, respectively. After a decade, South Korea rate for male employment rising slightly to about 78% in 2015. But the different is also highest for employment rate between male and female, which was nearly about to 38%. Figured for both Canada and Sweden experienced exactly the same in 2015. Overall, it can be stated that the percentage of working people increased with the proportion of women showing the most significant rise.

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