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Writing Task 1 Cambridge 15 page 71

Writing Task 1 Cambridge 15 page 71 N3OLy

The given diagram illustrate the procedure of making instant noodles. Overall, it can be seen that, instant noodles are made in eight distinct stages in a production plant which start with the delivery and storage of raw materials followed by verious other steps such as mixing, shaping, cooking, labelling before they are sent to the consumers. At first, the ingredient of instant noodles flour, are delivered to the factory where they are stored in storage silos. In second stages, flour is mixed with water and oil in a mixer the dough is converted dough sheets are then cut into strips (4th step) and then again into disc are then cooked in oil and then dried which are then placed in cups and then vegetables and seasoning are added afterwards. In the last stage, the cups are labelled and sealed automatically before they are finally ready to be sold

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given
 diagram illustrate the procedure of making instant noodles.

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, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that, instant noodles are made
 in eight distinct stages in a production plant which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 with the delivery and storage of raw materials followed by Possible spelling mistake found.variousserious
verious
 other steps such as mixing, shaping, cooking, labelling This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 they are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to the consumers.

At first
, the ingredient of instant noodles flour, are delivered
 to the factory where they are stored
 in storage silos. In second stages, flour is mixed
 with water and oil in a mixer the dough is converted
 dough sheets are then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 into strips (4th step) and then again into disc are then cooked in oil and then dried which are then placed in cups and then vegetables and seasoning are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 afterwards. In the last stage, the cups are labelled
 and sealed automatically
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before
 they are finally
 ready to be Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphsold.sold!sold?sold:sold,sold;
sold