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Given is the diagram of different teas and how they are produced

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The given diagramatic illustration provides the information about how to obtain five different sorts of tea. From the overview of the given data it's vivid that, there are several steps required to be followed for the proper production of tea which starts with leaf growing and end with oven drying. After having a keen observation of the given data it's depicts that, initially, leafs are grew, after that leafs are pluncked. In the third step, leafs are wilted. Then, white tea is simply grew but green tea is steamed. In the following step, there are three kinds of tea such as, green tea, oolong tea and large leaf black tea which are rolled small leaf black tea is crushed. After that, oolong tea get slightly fermented whereas, large leaf black tea and small black leaf tea get full fermented. Finally, all types of teas get oven dried.
The
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given
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diagramatic
illustration provides the information about how to obtain five
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different
sorts of tea.

From the overview of the
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given
data it's vivid that, there are several steps required to
be followed
for the proper production of
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tea
which
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starts
with
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leaf
growing and
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end
with oven drying.

After having a keen observation of the
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given
data it's depicts that,
initially
,
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leafs
are
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grew
, after that
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leafs
are
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pluncked
. In the third step,
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leafs
are wilted
. Then, white
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tea
is
simply
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grew
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but
green
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tea
is steamed
. In the following step, there are three kinds of
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tea
such as, green
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tea
,
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oolong
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tea
and large
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leaf
black
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tea
which
are rolled
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small
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leaf
black
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tea
is crushed
. After that,
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oolong
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tea
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get
slightly
fermented whereas, large
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leaf
black
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tea
and
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small
black
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leaf
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tea
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get
full fermented.
Finally
, all types of
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teas
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get
oven dried.
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IELTS academic Given is the diagram of different teas and how they are produced

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
147 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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