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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of internet users in the UK according to five different age groups during 4 years 2003-2006. Overall, it is clearly seen that the majority of surveyed age groups except for 16-24 group witnessed an increase in the final year 2006. In addition, the internet was the most prevalent among those in the youngest group. In 2003, about 80% of people aged 16-24 utilised the internet, whereas the figure for the oldest group was 0%. Within the given period, the former increased significantly to 100% in 2005 but later dropped back to approximately 90% in 2006. Meanwhile, despite a negligible decline in 2005 to roughly 15%, the latter recovered to 20% in the last year. Surprisingly, the figures for 25-44 and 45-64 age groups experienced the similar pattern. About 50% of adults age 25-64 used internet in 2003, compared to 60% of the olders. After 3 years, both these figures grew dramatically and peaked at 80% each. Regarding the remaining group, standing at nearly 30% in the starting years, the percentage of 55-64 year olds using the internet rose noticeably to about 50% in 2006.

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