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The diagram demonstrates the information regarding how tea leaves are used for making five different tea.

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The diagram demonstrates the information regarding how tea leaves are used for making five different tea. From the overview analysis, it is manifest that there are approximately seven stages in the process. Beginning with the growing leaf and culminating with the drying. Withering, rolling and crushing are necessary steps. Without these things this process cannot occur. After having a keen observation of the given data it is vivid that, initially, tea leaves are grown. After this, these leaves are plucked. In the following step, tea leaf is withered before drying it and white tea is ready. Stearning and rolling both are required in order to make green tea. In the subsequent step, for making oalong tea, leaf is rolled and slight formation is also needed. After that, it is dried with the assist of oven. In the next step, in order to make large black tea, rolling is necessary; however, for small leaf black tea, leaves are crushed instead of rolling. In the penultimate step, full formation is needed for making both these tea. Eventually, oven is used to dry leaf.
The diagram demonstrates the information regarding how
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tea
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leaves
are
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used
for making five
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different
tea.

From the overview analysis, it is manifest that there are approximately seven stages in the process. Beginning with the growing
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leaf
and culminating with the drying. Withering,
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rolling
and crushing are necessary
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steps
. Without these things this process cannot occur.

After having a keen observation of the
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given
data it is vivid that,
initially
,
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tea
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leaves
are grown
. After this, these
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leaves
are plucked
. In the following
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step
,
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tea
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leaf
is withered
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before
drying it and white
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tea
is ready.
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Stearning
and
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rolling
both
are required
in order to
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make
green
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tea
. In the subsequent
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step
, for making
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oalong
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tea
,
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leaf
is rolled
and slight formation is
also
needed. After that, it
is dried
with the assist of oven.

In the
next
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step
, in order to
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make
large black
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tea
,
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rolling
is necessary;
however
, for
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small
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leaf
black
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tea
,
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leaves
are crushed
instead
of
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rolling
. In the penultimate
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step
, full formation
is needed
for making both these
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tea
.
Eventually
, oven is
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used
to dry
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leaf
.
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IELTS academic The diagram demonstrates the information regarding how tea leaves are used for making five different tea.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
181 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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