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Write at least 4 sentences to describe the following pie chart

Write at least 4 sentences to describe the following pie chart DVXLA
The chart illustrates the proportion of electricity consumed on various household appliances. Overall, heating devices are the most energy-consuming while lighting, washing and vacuuming devices are significantly stuff. As can be seen from the pie chart, the electricity spending on running heating devices are over a half of the chart, at 52%, followed by washing tools at almost 20%. Lighting and vacuuming devices share the same proportion, at 15%, and together they are one-third of the electricity expenditure.
The chart illustrates the proportion of electricity consumed on various household appliances.

Overall
, heating
devices
are the most energy-consuming while lighting, washing and vacuuming
devices
are
significantly
stuff.

As can be
seen
from the pie chart, the electricity spending on running heating
devices
are over a half of the chart, at 52%, followed by washing tools at almost 20%. Lighting and vacuuming
devices
share the same proportion, at 15%, and together they are one-third of the electricity expenditure.
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IELTS academic Write at least 4 sentences to describe the following pie chart

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
78 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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