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Write at least 4 sentences to describe the following pie chart

Write at least 4 sentences to describe the following pie chart DVXLA

The chart illustrates the proportion of electricity consumed on various household appliances. Overall, heating devices are the most energy-consuming while lighting, washing and vacuuming devices are significantly stuff. As can be seen from the pie chart, the electricity spending on running heating devices are over a half of the chart, at 52%, followed by washing tools at almost 20%. Lighting and vacuuming devices share the same proportion, at 15%, and together they are one-third of the electricity expenditure.

The chart illustrates the proportion of electricity consumed on various household appliances.

Overall
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devices
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 from the pie chart, the electricity spending on running heating You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgearapparatusgadgetmaterialappliancemechanism
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 are over a half of the chart, at 52%, followed by washing tools at almost 20%. Lighting and vacuuming You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgearapparatusgadgetmaterialappliancemechanism
devices
 share the same proportion, at 15%, and together they are one-third of the electricity expenditure. 

IELTS academic Write at least 4 sentences to describe the following pie chart

Academic

American English

3 paragraphs

78 words

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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 7.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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