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The diagram demonstrates a complete process of cherry jam production lines. There are 9 main stages that the process is started by gathering cherries in the garden and finished by labeling jam containers in the factory. First, cherries are collected by spreading a sheet on the ground and shaking the tree. Next, the crops are transported by trucks to the factory. After that, cherries are sent into an automatic machine in order to separate the leaves, stems and extra things from fruit and classification the cherries as well. Next, washing process is done by spraying numerous water jets on the cherries while they are being moved on a ramp. After a while, the crops are directed by a conveyor in order to remove seeds. In this line plenty metal spikes are placed for pitting. Next stage is cooking cherries in a giant pot. Other ingredients are added during the process, as well. After checking the quality of jam by the experts in the laboratory, the jars are filled by jam in an automated process. Finally, all products are labeled

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started
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cherries
 in the garden and finished by labeling jam containers in the factory.

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cherries
are collected
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, the crops are transported
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cherries
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sent
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leaves
, stems and extra things from fruit and classification the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroseflamingmaroonglowingcardinalcrimson
cherries
as well
. Next
, washing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
is done
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cherries
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moved
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plenty
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cherries
 in a giant pot. Other ingredients are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
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process
, as well
. After checking the quality of jam by the experts in the laboratory, the jars are filled
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process
. Finally
, all products are labeled