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the village park 10 years ago, now

the village park 10 years ago, now AwxOe

The two maps illustrate the main changes thatoccurred to the village park between 10 years ago and now. Over the period in the question, the park witnessed considerabledevelopment with far more functionality. One striking change is that a cycle path has been built around the park for people to ride their bike if they wish to. 10 years ago, the car park had space available for 20 cars only but now it has been enlarged and has enough space for 50 cars. Likewise, the tennis court and football pitch have been extended, with a double increase in the number of courts for tennis players. Another notable change is the construction of a picnic area in the West of the park. If we look at the other side of the park, the woods have been cut down to make way for a new cafe, and the old pond has been transformed to a boating lake. Also, the children play area has been incorporated with a new children soft play area. Finally, a toilet has been constructed next to the football pitch, to the south of the play area.

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changes
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 to the village You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
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. Over the period in the question, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
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 witnessed Possible spelling mistake found.considerable development
considerabledevelopment
 with far more functionality.

One striking This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 is that a cycle path has been built
 around the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to ride their bike if they wish to. 10 years ago, the car You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 had space available for 20 cars This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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but
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now
 it has been enlarged
 and has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 space for 50 cars. Likewise
, the tennis court and football pitch have been extended
, with a double increase in the number of courts for tennis players.

Another notable This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 is the construction of a picnic You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 in the West of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
. If we look at the other side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
, the woods have been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 down to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 way for a new 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
, and the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 pond has been transformed
 to a boating lake. Also
, the children play You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 has been incorporated
 with a new Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "child"?child
children
 soft play You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
. Finally
, a toilet has been constructed
next
 to the football pitch, to the south of the play You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
. 