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The given diagram illustrates the process of producing pencil

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The given diagram illustrates the process of producing pencil. A deeper examination of the diagram reveals that there are 12 stages, commencing with planting seedlings and culminating with making pencil box. Looking at the diagram in more detail, in the first stage of the process, seedlings are replanted after four months of growth, and after three years, they have matured into trees. Subsequently, they were cut down after fourteen years of growing. They are transported to wood workshop, where they are cut into thin slats and treated. Over the following 60 days, these thin slats are glued and placed black lead into the premade groove and put another thin bar on before putting it into the heat machine to hard- pressed. Finally, they are cut into pieces then, and carefully labeled before boxed to sales for customers.
The
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given
diagram illustrates the process of producing pencil.

A deeper examination of the diagram reveals that there are 12 stages, commencing with planting seedlings and culminating with making pencil box.

Looking at the diagram in more detail, in the
first
stage of the process, seedlings
are replanted
after four months of growth, and after three years, they have matured into trees.
Subsequently
, they were
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cut
down after fourteen years of growing. They
are transported
to wood workshop, where they are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cut
into thin slats and treated. Over the following 60 days, these thin slats
are glued
and placed black lead into the
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premade
groove and put another thin bar on
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before
putting it into the heat machine
Did you mean "too"?
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
- pressed.
Finally
, they are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cut
into pieces then, and
carefully
labeled
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
boxed to sales for customers.
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IELTS academic The given diagram illustrates the process of producing pencil

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
137 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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