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The three pie charts in figure give visual representation of total consumption of resources divided among two geopolitical categories (USA & Europe and Others), the share of world population of the continent of Asia, Africa, Americas, Europe and others and the distribution of the world spending among different categories, mainly food, transportation, housing, clothing and others. Overall, Europe and the USA, record the highest share of consumption of resources despite not being the most populated regions in the world. Furthermore, world spending is mostly focused on housing, food, transportation and others, with others being the single largest sectors and clothing being the smallest. Going into more details, Europe and the USA account for 60% of total resource consumption and their joint populations would be less than 28% of the total, given that Europe apports 14% while the US, which is part of the sector of the Americas, which also contributes 14%, would inevitably share a lower than 14% portion of the world population. Asia, on the other hand, accounts for a total share of world population of 57% and a respective consumption of resources which would be less than 40%. The statistic becomes even more significant if we divide 40% of total consumption by a share of population which is in surplus of 72% (Asia, Africa, others and countries in the Americas which are not under the USA’s jurisdiction). Lastly, 54% of total spending is distributed among food, transport and housing (24%, 18%, 12%, respectively. The share would touch 60% if clothing was to be included, individually accounting for 6% of world spending, by far the lowest percentage and half of clothing. Other is the largest sector with a share of global expenditure of 40%.
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of resources divided among two geopolitical categories (USA & Europe
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population
of the continent of Asia, Africa, Americas, Europe
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and others
and the distribution of the
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world
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spending
among
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different
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mainly
food, transportation, housing, clothing
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and others
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, Europe and the USA, record the highest
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of resources despite not being the most populated regions in the
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and others
, with others being the single largest sectors and clothing being the smallest.

Going into more
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, Europe and the USA account for 60% of
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resource
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consumption
and their joint
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populations
would be less than 28% of the
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,
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a lower than 14% portion of the
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population
. Asia, on the
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hand, accounts for a
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of 57% and a respective
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of resources which would be less than 40%. The statistic becomes even more significant if we divide 40% of
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consumption
by a
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of
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which is in surplus of 72% (Asia, Africa, others and countries in the Americas which are not under the USA’s jurisdiction).

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, 54% of
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is distributed
among food, transport and housing
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24%, 18%, 12%,
respectively
. The
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would touch 60% if clothing was to
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,
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, by far the lowest percentage and half of clothing.
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is the largest sector with a
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of global expenditure of 40%.
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