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The chart below shows the number of visitor arriving in a particular country for a short trip, and the number of residents leaving that country for a short trip, from 2009 to 2011.

The chart below shows the number of visitor arriving in a particular country for a short trip, and the number of residents leaving that country for a short trip, from 2009 to 2011. 9LaXW
The line graph shows the number of people in a particular country arriving and departing on a short trip between 2009 and 2011. At first glance, it can clearly be seen that the number of resident individuals who left the country was greater than the tourists who came, and the lines of the chart did not intersect at all during the specified period. According to the graph, both residents and tourists travelers increased gradually and approximately at the same rate from October 2009 to October 2010. The number of residents people depart started at 550000 trippers in October 2009 and raised to 605000 trippers in October 2010. While in the same period, the visitor arrival number started at 490000 tourists and raised to peak at 525000 tourists in October 2010. After October 2010, the number of residents departs continues to increase dramatically and arrived at 650000 trippers in June 2011, While, for one reason or another the number of arriving visitors dropped slowly and reach 495000 tourists in June 2011. To sum up, the number of residents, who leave the country for short trips were higher than tourists, and the number of visitors fluctuated over the period and reaching a peak of 525 thousand tourists in October 2010.
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in a particular country arriving and departing on a short trip between 2009 and 2011. At
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the country was greater than the
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who came, and the lines of the chart did not intersect at all during the specified period.

According to the graph, both
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travelers increased
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and approximately at the same rate from October 2009 to October 2010. The
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at 550000 trippers in October 2009 and raised to 605000 trippers in October 2010. While in the same period, the visitor arrival
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and raised to peak at 525000
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tourists
in October 2010. After October 2010, the
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departs continues to increase
dramatically
and arrived at 650000 trippers in June 2011, While, for one reason or another the
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of arriving visitors dropped
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and reach 495000
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in June 2011.

To sum up, the
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, who
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the country for short trips were higher than
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, and the
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of visitors fluctuated over the period and reaching a peak of 525 thousand
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in October 2010.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the number of visitor arriving in a particular country for a short trip, and the number of residents leaving that country for a short trip, from 2009 to 2011.

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