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The table shows/illustrates/demonstrates the percentage of commuters=people who use each form of transport to work and their average age in Houston, Texas.

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The table shows/illustrates/demonstrates the percentage of commuters=people who use each form of transport to work and their average age in Houston, Texas. The bar chart illustrates the amount of CO2 emitted in kilograms per person per kilometer from=caused by different methods of transport. Overall, cars are the most popular means of transportation while/whereas cycling and walking are the least popular ones. People who walk and cycle cause the least amount of pollution in contrast to/different from people who prefer to drive to work. 48% of people who travel to work prefer to drive. Public transport (trains and buses) is the second most common means of transport with 37 %. By contrast, only/just 4% of travelers cycle or walk to work. Although the average age of commuters are quite close to each other, people who travel by train or bus have the highest average age with 47. The youngest group are the people who prefer/ enjoy walking or cycling at 39 on average. The most preferred means of transport which is the car is also the most CO2 emitted in kilograms per person per kilometer with about 0. 35 kg. In contrast, cycle or walk have 0 kilogram CO2 emitted in each person each kilometer. Besides, the public transport which is trains and buses have approximately 0. 01 kilograms CO2 emitted in per person per kilometer.
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and their average age in Houston, Texas. The bar chart illustrates the amount of CO2
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emitted
in kilograms per
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per kilometer from=caused by
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walk and cycle cause the least amount of pollution
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travel to
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prefer to drive. Public
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(trains and buses) is the second most common means of
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with 37 %. By contrast,
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4% of travelers cycle or walk to
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. Although the average age of commuters are quite close to each other,
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travel by train or bus have the highest average age with 47. The youngest group are the
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prefer/ enjoy walking or cycling at 39 on average.

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per kilometer with about 0. 35 kg.
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which is trains and buses have approximately 0. 01 kilograms CO2
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IELTS academic The table shows/illustrates/demonstrates the percentage of commuters=people who use each form of transport to work and their average age in Houston, Texas.

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