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Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. bBRq
In this analysis we will examine three pie charts. The first one is headed ‘World Spending. ’ The second is ‘World Population’ and the third is ‘Consumption of Resources. ’ In the first chart we can see that people spend most of their income (24%) on food. In some countries this percentage would obviously be much higher. Transport and then housing are the next major expenses at 18% and 12% respectively. Only 6% of income is spent on clothing. In the second chart entitled ‘World Population’, it is not surprising to find that 57% of people live in Asia. In fact China and India are two of the most populated countries in the world and they are both situated on this continent. Europe and the Americans account for nearly 30% of the total, whilst 10% of people live in Africa. Finally, the third chart reveals that the USA and Europe consume a huge 60% of the world’s resource. To sum up, the major expenditure is on food, the population figures are the highest for Asia and the major consumers are the USA and Europe.
In this analysis we will examine three pie
charts
. The
first
one
is headed
‘World
Spending. ’ The second is
‘World
Population’ and the third is ‘Consumption of Resources. ’

In the
first
chart
we can
see
that
people
spend most of their income (24%) on food. In
some
countries this percentage would
obviously
be much higher. Transport and then housing are the
next
major expenses at 18% and 12%
respectively
.
Only
6% of income
is spent
on clothing.

In the second
chart
entitled
‘World
Population’, it is not surprising to find that 57% of
people
live
in Asia. In fact China and India are two of the most populated countries in the
world and
they are both situated on this continent. Europe and the Americans account for
nearly
30% of the total, whilst 10% of
people
live
in Africa.

Finally
, the third
chart
reveals that the USA and Europe consume a huge 60% of the
world’s
resource.

To sum up, the major expenditure is on food, the population figures are the highest for Asia and the major consumers are the USA and Europe.
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IELTS academic Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
184 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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