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The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1

The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. dPBP
The diagram below illustrates the process of converting wave-energy into electricity by specialized device and two possibilities for install given machine. Overall, A wave-energy machine utilise air and water to generate electricity. Moreover, location of device may affect the result and expenditure. To begin with, there are two chambers, two turbine and an electricity generator of this motor. The below chamber consist water and above chamber has turbine which is connected with electricity generator. In addition, air flow passes from one chamber to another by crossing the turbine as a result turbine starts to spinning through this electric power produce. Furthermore, two alternative spots are available to set up the wave-energy machines. Firstly, if the Device is establish at large waves section then it creates high output but installation cost for this is very costly. On the other hand, with cheaper cost machin6 locates at small waves area whereas output of it is relatively lower than former option.
The diagram below illustrates the process of converting wave-energy into
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electricity
by specialized device and two possibilities for install
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given
machine.

Overall
, A wave-energy machine
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utilise
air and water to generate
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electricity
.
Moreover
, location of device may affect the result and expenditure.

To
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begin
with, there are two
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chambers
, two
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turbine
and an
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electricity
generator of this motor. The below
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chamber
consist water and above
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chamber
has
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turbine
which
is connected
with
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electricity
generator.
In addition
, air flow passes from one
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chamber
to another by crossing the
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turbine
as a result
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turbine
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starts
to spinning through this electric power produce.

Furthermore
, two alternative spots are available to set up the wave-energy machines.
Firstly
, if the Device is
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establish
at large waves section then it creates high output
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but
installation cost for this is
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very
costly.
On the other hand
, with cheaper cost machin6 locates at
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small
waves area whereas output of it is
relatively
lower than former option.
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IELTS academic The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
158 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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