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It is obvious that there are a lot of things that people have to cope with, especially for middle groups. The greatest problems that the two older groups suffer is taking care of their healthy, with the percentage of more than 35 percent in each ones. However, it is easier for the oldest group to deal with the lack of money, a problem experienced by nearly 30 percent of people in this group. In comparison, the two younger groups find it harder, with the percentage of people confronting is higher, from nearly 35 to 35 percent. It is also simple for the two extreme groups to handle with chosing school for their children, with only 2 to 6 percent of people. In contrast to this two groups, middle people struggle this problem more hardly, with nearly 20 percent people in this group.

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