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The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012.

The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012. E3L5r
The line graph illustrates the unemployment situation in Austraila in the year 2012. The graph is been divided into four different quarters to depict the results. The adverse effect was seen more in Rural compare to Urban areas. In the rural areas, percentage of unemployement nearly reached 7% of its population. which had a reasonable fall over the second quarter to nearly 4. 5% and remained stabled with fewer fluctation of 0. 5% till the end of the year. Which increased the amount of employment to acceptable rate. On other hands, Urban areas being the happening place for the employment due to dwellings of diverse people. Although seen very less unemployment rate approximately to 2% in the first quatrer, but due uncertain conditions increased the rate upto 4% in early second quater, however had a drastic downfall in the third quater. Perhaps the situation didnt seem any benefical effect of decline rather showed up its evil part with reaching nearly 5% of Urban population.
The line graph illustrates the unemployment situation in
Austraila
in the year 2012. The graph
is been
divided into four
different
quarters to depict the results.
The
adverse effect was
seen
more in Rural compare to Urban areas.

In the rural areas, percentage of
unemployement
nearly
reached 7% of its population.
which
had a reasonable fall over the second quarter to
nearly
4. 5% and remained stabled with fewer
fluctation
of 0. 5% till the
end
of the year.
Which
increased the amount of employment to acceptable rate.

On other hands, Urban areas being the happening place for the employment due to dwellings of diverse
people
. Although
seen
very
less unemployment rate approximately to 2% in the
first
quatrer
,
but
due uncertain conditions increased the rate
upto
4% in early second
quater
,
however
had a drastic downfall in the third
quater
. Perhaps the situation
didnt
seem any
benefical
effect of decline
rather
showed
up its evil part with reaching
nearly
5% of Urban population.
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IELTS academic The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012.

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