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The chart shows annual office rents in 5 international cities in 2008 and 20013 (US dollars /square metre). The table shows office vacancy rates in those cities. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows annual office rents in 5 international cities in 2008 and 20013 (US dollars /square metre). The table shows office vacancy rates in those cities. GMr5o
The chart gives us information about how much it costs per square meter to rent an office for a year in five cities worldwide, WHEREAS the table indicates the percentage of offices that stood empty in 2008 and 2013. Seen together, there appears to exist a relationship between the vacancy rates and the cost for renting an apartment. In general, the office rents increased over the five-year period. However, in 2013 there was one exception to this: in city D, the office rents decreased from 2008 to 2013 to just over 500 dollars. By 2013 city B had replaced city A as the city with the highest rents. In 2013 city B’s rental cost reached around 2250 dollars, while city A’s one had just gone below 2000 dollars. On the other hand, city D experienced a significant drop and replaced city E as the town with the lowest rents. Turning to the table, the general trend showed lower vacancy rates in 2013 than in 2008. In other words less offices were empty in 2013 than in 2008. Both city E and city B experienced a significant drop in the offices that stood empty in 2013, 2% and 9% respectively. In conclusion, based on this charts, it would appear that lower vacancy rates lead to higher rental prices.
The chart gives us information about how much it costs per square meter to
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increased over the five-year period.
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over 500 dollars. By 2013 city B had replaced city A as the city with the highest
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gone below 2000 dollars.
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lower vacancy rates in 2013 than in 2008.
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were empty in 2013 than in 2008. Both city E and city B experienced a significant drop in the
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that stood empty in 2013, 2% and 9%
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charts, it would appear that lower vacancy rates lead to higher rental prices.
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IELTS academic The chart shows annual office rents in 5 international cities in 2008 and 20013 (US dollars /square metre). The table shows office vacancy rates in those cities.

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