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The bar graph shows automobiles were owned per million of people in China during the period 1987 to 1999. There is clearly a trend that over the years became much more common to own a vehicle in China. Between 1987 and 1991 we can observe a slightly increased vehicle ownership. From 500 cars per million people in 1987 to about 800 hundred per million people in 1991. By contrast, from 1991 to 1999 there was a dramatic increase in vehicle ownership. Although the increase was gradual at first, it was in 1999 that it took off with just over 4 thousand vehicles per million people, eight fold more than in 1907. Overall, it can be seen that the popular trend to own a private vehicle became a great deal more popular in China over those years. It started to increase exponentially during the last 2 decades of the 20th century.
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in China during the period 1987 to 1999.

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a trend that over the years became much more common to
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own
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vehicle
in China. Between 1987 and 1991 we can observe a
slightly
increased
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vehicle
ownership. From 500 cars per
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million
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people
in 1987 to about 800 hundred per
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million
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people
in 1991. By contrast, from 1991 to 1999 there was a dramatic increase in
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vehicle
ownership. Although the increase was gradual at
first
, it was in 1999 that it took off with
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over 4 thousand
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vehicles
per
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million
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people
, eight
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more than in 1907.

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, it can be
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that the popular trend to
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a private
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vehicle
became a great deal more popular in China over those years. It
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to increase
exponentially
during the last 2 decades of the 20th century.
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IELTS academic write a report about vehicle ownership in China.

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3 paragraphs
150 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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